great but...
why did you submit it twice?
if this is the final version, make sure to delete the other one.
again, great job!
great but...
why did you submit it twice?
if this is the final version, make sure to delete the other one.
again, great job!
Yeah, I accidentally submitted this vid twice. How do I remove the other vid, because this is the one I intended to upload. And thanks!
LOL
This is both hilarious and wrong on so many levels!
A very nice work, but you can be sure you'll get some hate mail. tough it out though, I expect this to do very well!
quick! if you haven't already, put a link to the christmas 2008 videos on the title page, so it will qualify for the winter contest! you have a good chance!
keep up the good work!
great work!
This animation is very touching, and it is a nice change from some of the other kinds of animations usually shown on the front page.
You should be very happy with this, keep up the great work!
well done!
THis is very well done!
I can see you put a lot of time and effort into it; the comedy was good and the parody version of the ocarina of time storyline was great!
My only complaint would be Navi's voice. I feel like you could have done better with that. Voice actors, perhaps?
anyway, keep up the good work!
I'd like to see more parodies from you like this. Some ones from other zelda games would be cool!
it's good!
I wouldn't stop it, I'd finish it, and then move to something bigger and better. the only way to get better is to practice, and a big part of that is finishing what you start. you can do it!
There is still room for a good storyline in here. you have the ability to make this great. collaborate with some other artists and writers for ideas.
as for the animation, it's quite good!
Keep it up!
nice
It's quite good, some of the better DBZ animation I've seen here. As people have stated, it needs to be longer, have sound, background, etc.
you could make a good story with this. the DBZ collection hasn't been touched in forever.
great!
very very very good for your first flash!
I would like to see this movie continue! Keep honing your skills and improve, and your next one will surpass yours and everyone's expectations!
4 votes for a #2 thy will shall be done a Part 2 shall be made. Thanks for the AWESOME reviews from you and everyone else.
TONS BETTER!
Hey!
This is times and times better than your first one! You're really developing your skills, and I can't wait to see what happens when you get flash!
And look at all the support your getting from people! You're going to be a success in no time at all!
And now people understand that you are using moviemaker, which is good. A lot of people are recognizing your talent and cannot wait for you to get flash!
Anyway yeah, the drawings were definitely improved, and the added storyline certianly adds depth to the movie. Plus it looks like she's cheering up and becoming less depressed, which is always a plus in my book.
Keep it up!
awesome!
Another great awesome parody!
I'll admit I didn't like it as much as some of the other ones, and I thought it was a little short, but even so I enjoyed it very much, as I have all of your work!
Keep it up!
nice trick!
I'll admit. I'm not a fan of emo flash, or the general mindset. I prefer to find happy outlooks in life and look on the bright side, etc. I could go on and on about that, as I have seen many things to make me realize just how lucky I am.
but aside from that.
There was one thing in this video that very much impressed me.
the beginning part.
the dedication. Neat trick.
when i saw it was dedicated to me, I wondered how the hell that could have happened. then I tried logging out.
Good sir, I'm not sure how you did it, but it is quite impressive. nice job. ;)
Haha, it was quite easy. Newgrounds passes the name of whoever's logged in to the flash through flashvars. I just call it. :3
My name is Andrew, and I'm a video designer and visual creative. I do photography, videography, motion graphics, cinematic editing, graphic design, and advertising. Visit me online! www.andrewczudak.com
Age 35, Male
Visual Creative
University of Delaware
Philadelphia, PA
Joined on 7/13/06